Monday, November 2, 2009

Group Story Finalists-4

Where's my home?
By Judy (with Mira & Charlene)

When John got home and as he entered the house, he realized everything had changed. Tonight John hang out with his old friends and they drunk a lot of beer because today John had a raise in his work. But looking at the situation, he felt a little shocked because he thought he was in his dream. He kept asking himself where all my new furniture are. “A thief came in?”But why did a thief have to exchange my furniture because he was supposed to steal expensive stuff, such as money or diamond. He felt very confused and then he went to his room to check whether the money was still here. Fortunately, the box with his money was still in his room. After all check, he thought nothing expensive and important got lost and he was ready to go to bed. But one minute later, he woke up urgently. Finally he noticed that his son was not in the house. It was 2 A.M. He shouted and cried suddenly: “ Where is my son?”

He felt so worried about whether his son was kidnapped. And he also felt helpless and then decided to call the police. After a while, the police came to his home and he explained everything to them, listen his explanation, the police promised him they will do their best to get his son back so the only thing can he do right now was to pray and be patient. At that time, someone knocked into the house and asked John :“what are you doing in my house?” This man whose name is Mike insisted that this is his house… At that moment, everybody kept silent and felt more confused. We even could hear a pin drop. All people wanted to know who the real owner is. Suddenly, John’s cell phone rang and it was his son!!! “Dad, where are you right now? When will you come home?” Finally John got awake from drunken and realized he already moved to the new house. He was in his old house now. Everything was clearly at that time, he felt so embarrassed about everything since he was the person to cause this huge and ridiculous mistake. He apologized to everyone and went back to his new home.

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