Group Story Finalists-2

Susan’s Revenge
By Harry (with Hassan and Jason)

Susan’s last boyfriend had been a total jerk, so as she headed to meet this new guy, she was nervous. Because she had a bad experience but that new guy was opposite, he was handsome and rich.

He seemed to become the best man to her. They had good time; sometimes they went to movies, had a dinner, and went back to the new guy’s home together. One day they drunk much alcohol and talked a lot something about each other in his house as usual. Her new gorgeous guy became exhausted and went to take a shower. While she was waiting for him, she noticed his cellular phone. Suddenly she wondered whether he loves her and checked out his messages and contact list carefully. She surprised that there were many girl’s names and messages from them badly, but she ignored that and believed her guy only had loved her.

Two days later, Susan went to a restaurant which was close to her lover’s company for lunch. When she came to the restaurant, she found that her lover was with her best friend. Before she went to talk to them, she was enraged because they were kissing. She didn’t want to believe that situation and ran away home. She cried all night and talked herself insanely. Unfortunately, it seemed that she was already crazy. She said, ‘I will kill him cruelly’

After Susan decided to kill her lover, suddenly she went to a gun store. However, she couldn’t buy a gun for the murder because she had no qualification to buy it. Inevitably, she got one gun from gang through illegal route. Getting a murder weapon took a long time but her anger didn’t subsided. The more the process was difficult, the more her madness was getting bigger.

Finally, the day which Susan had decided to kill him came. She was as crazy as ever and was waiting for her lover in front of his company’s entrance. At that time, she could see her lover who was going toward her. At once, he found out his forgotten lover who was grasping a gun in hand. The crazy girl was coming up to him slowly and stretched out her arm to shoot the gun. She didn’t ask anything to him and just pull the trigger toward his heart without hesitation. Susan said to herself as she smiled sadly.